Quite a nice riff – BUT did you really really have to play the same rhythym throughout the entire song???????

After about 1:30, you rnice riff became dammn irritating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And it went on for another 2:30!

Your song could have been 5-10 times better if you had been less self-indulgent. No one can truly listen to the same rhythm for more than 2 minutes and it has to be a damn good rhythm.

Cheers
RoRK